We need a lolly in our lunch
Argument
Mr Naidoo I strongly believe we should have one lolly at school because it is so delicious. Firstly we should bring lollys to school because it will always make you have energy and it
makes you crazy.
secondly
Lollys are very sweet because it has a lot of sugar.
Fruit lollies are so very good because it makes your breath smell so fresh.Or you can have extra. Extra makes our lunch box smell nice because lollis smell nice.
Thirdly
Mr Naidoo we love to have just one lolly so we can get energy get strong and also hypo.A lolly is a sweetening lolly that makes you want to take to school.The lollipop will make you have a purple tongue a blue tongue.Mr Naidoo we all love sweets because it will make all of our breath smell so nice it will change colour.
concluion
We want t bring sweets to make us have the energy that we had before we can run faster. Also it will us have a listening problem and it will make us so brainy lastly it will make our teeth clean. The lolly will make us very hyperactive and we will get so crazy at home at school. I want to bring a lolly Mr Naidoo.
