Moko makes quality comments

We have been learning how to leave a positive digital footprint.

We know we are doing this because we are leaving good, quality

comments. Here Is the comment I have left. It is positive compliment on Keaneau's story.

I made a connection by saying  I like to be a policeman too.

I finished my comment by asking a question that might add more to the story.

mystery beach

Danger beach

One sunny sunny morning I was walking to the beach and my 2 friends and I went to mission bay and we saw lots and lots of kids and families on the sand and some were also swimming. There were lots of people having fun in the water also the children were having fun playing on the sand. The mums were helping the children with the sand castle.

All of a sudden I came with my friends and they all surrounded me and then I could not find Patrick. After that we had to go and find Patrick and bring him back to the beach. I just recognized that he was gone because when I was surrounded Patrick was not there so we did not find him.

so I had to go back to the beach and play sandcastle with Frank. Then I heard footsteps and I looked back and it was Patrick eating ice blocks and he brang 2 ice block along for me and Frank. Then a man saw a shark and he got very not focused and that was danger beach. No one won't go too danger beach never again.